Walt: tell a story using a variety of sentences of different lengths; and
Walt: ask for feedback to help us make changes that add impact to our story.
Task Description: Hi my name is Zamera and this is my Work today we had to do some writing about sentences.We had to work on our sentences because some of us don't know how to do a proper sentences.We had to write little sentences in the box and then when we are finished we have to ask the teacher if we can put it on our blog and if she says yes then we can put it on our blog
Hi zamera you are doing a really great job and it looks like that you have been doing your really best. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BY NEVAEH.
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