Walt: understand the text from the perspectives of the characters
Dear Lauren
You should both feel the same like me.The only reason Dad said that is because he thinks you could of did much more better and I agree with Dad because I reckon you could of came first but at least you came third and that’s good.In Lauren's shot put competition I think she tried her hardest but then I think she didn’t because she sounded proud when she said that she just came third,but then she tried and she came third.Also that was kind of mean to say but it’s the right thing to say to Lauren but maybe you could of expected more but at least she came in the top three.Then Dad you should apologias to Lauren saying that you didn’t mean what you said and Lauren you should apologias to your Dad for not giving it your everything but it’s good you came something.
Sincerely Dad
Task Description:For this task we had to read a book about Giving It A shot.This book is about a girl who does shot put and doesn't think she has to go and train and because she came third but her father thinks that she could have giving more to Shot Put and maybe she could of came first.This letter is about thinking about Dad and Lauren and how they feel.When we finish we have to ask our teacher if we can post it and if he says yes then we can.
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