Everything Goes Down Hill

WALT: Hook our readers in by appealing to our target audience

One day  there was a girl and her name was Emma she was 10 years old and also the oldest out of her siblings, then there’s her brother Jonathan 7 years old and the last one her little brother Nathan he was only 5 years old.They all made up a plan between themselves and the plan was to get there Car cart and ride it down their neighbourhood road but the road was steep it can make you go flying and you might end up in hosplite. They all agreed on doing it the next day they all couldn't wait.

So today is the day they go riding down the hill they get their Car cart and Nathan hops into the driver's seat and the Jonathan at the back getting ready to push it and then Emma sitting in the front, they all count down 3,2,1 then Jonathan use all of his speed and push it while hanging on they shoot down fast like a meteor is coming to earth and Jonathan is almost flying but lucky his holding on to the Cart.There all screaming people are coming out of their housing to see what's happening and they can’t believe her eyes there yelling at them telling them to stop when Nathan tries to pull the back it breaks off and they can’t break.Jonathan and Nathan thought it was the end they thought they were going to end up in hosplite.

But lucky Emma spotted a bush she yelled turn to the bushes so Nathan turned the wheel and they went flying down towards the bush they all crashed into the bush.They were all so relieved that nothing really bad happened.The neighbours came running down saying are you alright lucky they were alright they only had a few bruises and a few scratches but they were all fine except for the Car cart.All of them agreed to never do anything dump like that or else they might just end up in hosplite. THE END.

This is the picture we had to write about.

Task Description:For this task we had to write a story based around a picture when were writing we use the word T.O.P.S which stands for Title,Orientation,Problem and Solution. When doing this we had to use these things to help us with it.We didn't have to write it big but I just wanted to.When we finish doing our writing we have to post it into blogger then put a Task Description,Labels and a Title.Then we post it onto our blog.