Persuasive Writing

WALT: Plan out a persuasive piece of writing

Task Description: For this task we had to do a special piece of writing which is Persuasive writing.If you don't know what Persuasive writing is well it's trying to change there mind about something and also its about your opinion about something.When we finish we have to ask our teacher if we can post it on our blog and if she says yes then we can but with a task description.

The Royal Family Dance Crew-Coming To Pt England

Today was a very special day, Do you want to know why?Well because the one and only best dance crew came to our school,The Royal Family.I was so excited when my teacher told us that the Royal family was coming but it wasn't the older Royal Family dance crew it was the junior, but I was still happy even though it wasn't the older crew.I was standing outside of my classroom which was near the car park and I couldn't believe my eyes it was the Royal Family junior crew.They were wearing black tights with there Royal Family t-shirt.My class lined up and we walked down to the hall I was so exited when we walked in there they were the one and only Royal Family junior dance crew they were standing on the stage and we all waited till everyone was seated.Then the microphone was handed over to there helper her name was Shea, then she said they were going to travel to America to compete in Competition she said they were going in 7 days.Then it was time for them to dance,BOOM the song started playing and they all started doing these cool and fancy dance moves.Everybody started clapping when they did the Crowns up and everyone was cheering for them.They danced for 15 minutes and then they stopped for a break, when they stopped that people could ask question then when the kids finish asking the question four people came up on the stage for a dance off.They played the song and the kids that were on the stage were dancing hand of they danced from 3 minutes and then Shea said that to cheer for the person that should when the person that won was a Year 6 she got a chocolate.Then it was time for the next half of there dance, the song played and they were dancing hard out there were lots of cool songs and also dance moves.There final dance ended off with CROWNS UP,everybody was clapping cheering for them.Sadly they had to leave quickly because they had to go some where.Today was a very exciting day I hope next year The Royal Family Dance Crew come to Pt England again.Also a little tip-if you don't know who there choreograph is it is the famous Parris Goebel.